Friday, 8 November 2013

My Other Me

What are we fighting for?
What do you really want from me?

My response is still same. NO!
No I won't do that!

What did u say? Who me? Of course that's a lie.
How dare you think of me that way?
You really think I could do that? That’s unfair of you.

Sometimes I even wonder what I’m doing with you.
You cloud my mind with your suggestions, making me think it's the truth when its all lies.

I thought you were my friend.
I really can't believe I have you with me.

Oh! So you won't talk back?
You aren't saying anything anymore?
You are silent on me now?

What again? No... That’s not true.
I can't believe my ears. You are just so inhumane.
How could you say these things to me? Even after I trusted you with me.
...With the whole of me.
I tell you things and you tell it back at me in a bitter way.

Why are you so evil?

I can't take this anymore. I’m leaving this place for you alone.
You can stay in the room all by yourself all you want.
It seems leaving you in the mirror was a bad idea.

You always seem to replicate what I do and make it evil!

Nooooo!!!!!!! Get away from meeeeeee!!!!!


  1. Was scared at some point had to remind myself it is a poem...or is it? Lovely piece I might add

  2. Oh Marcelo - we all have our dark side. It pains me to admit that I have; the other me who thinks unspeakable things; the other me who would like to do bad (not so sure about evil) things for the sheer pleasure of them.
    Luckily I have a conscience and follow that.
    Anna :o]

    1. Hi Anna. I totally agree with you. Conscience keeps us from crossing the lines... although we do cross those lines sometimes.

      My mind runs wild all of the time and a lot of words comes to my head to put to sentence what I think. I'm like an iceberg. ...if you now what I mean. :))

      You are always welcome here Anna. :)

  3. For a second, it felt like me talking to me.weird isn't it? Beautiful piece.

  4. Very nice Piece Marcel, I like

  5. Very nice Piece Marcel, I like